For farm to market we had to visit Hackney city farm and a market of our own choice, where we had to draw specific objects and animals. from our rough sketches we had to make 9 simplified logos. I've been practicing illustrator and this has helped me to get a little better at it.
This is great Lauren.
ReplyDeleteJust from an aesthetic point of view I would close the gap between 'Farm To' and 'Market' a little, reduce the icons just a little bit in size to give enough breathing room around them - and the edge of the poster. And get rid of the black square surrounding the watch - it dominates and draws the attention as everything else is in fairly subtle pastel shades.
The placement of the circular sheep also feels a little lopsided as it is left of centre due to the gun - if you angled the gun up, it could have more room and be central.
Advice if you want it...
Thanks Ed, will work on it!
ReplyDeleteThat looks much better - excellent!
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